Pixie Report: 5 steps to a stronger manuscript

A Pixie Report gives you 5 specific, actionable recommendations for taking your manuscript to the next level. Less full-on than The Monster but just as valuable!

Worked on your manuscript as much as you can and just don’t know what it needs next?

Read and reread your draft so many times the word ‘said’ doesn’t look real to you anymore?

Ready to hand it over to somebody who can look at it with fresh eyes and give you super helpful feedback that will make it stronger, more marketable, a book children or teenagers can fall in love with?

When I read your book, I’ll identify the 5 areas of your story with the biggest room for improvement. That might include your character arc, the believability of your world building, slightly wonky pacing or a climax that doesn’t quite hit the mark – these 5 recommendations will be completely different for every author based on what I think just isn’t working in your story right now.

What exactly is a Pixie Report?

There are two things included with a full manuscript critique:

1. 1. Editorial letter in PDF usually around 10 pages of A4. This will identify and explore the five biggest issues with your manuscript, complete with recommendations and advice for addressing these issues and strengthening your story.
   2. Access to Untangling Children’s Books course (usually £68)

What it’s not

A Pixie Report isn’t an ‘edit’ in the sense of a copy-edit that physically tweaks your prose or fixes your typos. I won’t change or delete anything in your story, or make comments or suggestions in the margin. In fact, I won’t touch your manuscript document (other than reading it). I will write an editorial letter with all my feedback for you to read through and digest, and what you do with it is up to you! I’ll only address the story elements of your novel, not line-level or copyediting issues like language, spelling, syntax or grammar. These can be addressed by a line or copy-editor and I absolutely recommend you hire one further down the line to get your manuscript ready for publication.

My feedback process

• 1. Full read through: I’ll read your manuscript and make lots of notes.
  2. Plotting and scheming: This is the time I spend thinking about your story and letting it sit before starting my critique. I’ll write up some rough notes about my immediate reactions to your manuscript, like a letter to myself that helps me untangle all my thoughts and ideas and start putting my reader response into words.
  3. Read your questionnaire: At the beginning of the process I’ll send you an author questionnaire that asks you about your story, your experience and your publishing goals. I don’t read this straight away as I don’t want it to influence my initial response to your manuscript when I come to it for the first time, but I’ll read it as soon as I’ve finished reading.
  4. Update my checklist: I have a critique checklist that I customise for every manuscript I work on, and I’ll take any specific concerns from your questionnaire and drop them in. For example, if you mention you’re not sure your protagonist is likeable enough or that you struggle with your chapter endings, I’ll flag these in my checklist to ensure I address them in my critique.
  5. Research and background reading: I like to immerse myself in the books you love so I can understand your influences and goals, so when I send you my author questionnaire I’ll ask for your favourite authors and novels in your genre. When I discuss any issues of writing craft in your editorial letter, I can pull out examples from books you love to demonstrate a technique or narrative device so it’ll click for you faster.
  6. Write your report: Next I’ll turn all my jumbled notes and ideas into a long, detailed editorial letter, going through each of the 7 elements one by one. I’ll tell you what I think needs more work, demonstrating techniques and explaining exactly how you can tackle any problem areas.

Let’s get started!

I can’t tell you how excited I am to read your manuscript. So, if you have middle grade or YA story you want to chat about, please give me a shout – it’ll make my day!