
Get a children’s book editor in your pocket! Chat to me any time, ALL DAY, over WhatsApp through texts and voice notes
Hi, busy author! I have some questions for you:
🐺 Ever been in the middle of revisions and just wished you could ask an expert a quick question, there and then, so that you could get unstuck and carry on with your edits?
🐺 Ever feel like a manuscript critique or dev edit isn’t quite enough? You need way more back and forth than that!
🐺 Ever struggle to formulate your questions or ideas neatly and succinctly in an email and just wish you could fire off a stream-of-consciousness brain dump and be done with it?
Yeah? Then you’re going to absolutely LOVE this new WhatsApp VIP Day: Editor in my Pocket offer!
Imagine having a professional children’s book editor (that’s me!) on call for the day, replying to your messages and answering your questions there and then instead of taking days or even weeks to put a response together!
Don’t get me wrong: most of my editing services require a lot of time and focus, and my average turnaround for edits and critiques is one month. But sometimes I just love to reply to an author’s message right away with a ‘YES! That’s such a great idea, do it!’ or ‘Why not move her story goal forward and see if that helps?’ or ‘Stop right there! I know a great blog post you have to read before you write that next scene.’
That way, you can move on with your writing without waiting around for days for advice.
What can we talk about?
Absolutely anything! Well, as long as it’s vaguely about middle grade or YA books. I can help you with your first draft or manuscript revisions, we can talk about our favourite children’s books, you can check with me about middle grade publishing conventions or YA reader expectations, you can bounce story ideas off me, I can help you with a tricky scene or chapter, you can run a line or paragraph of prose by me.
It’ll be like having a children’s book editor sitting next to you while you work, but less annoying.
I won’t read or feed back on entire chapters of your manuscript (I’ve got services for that!) but I’m happy to take a look at short scenes.
Does it have to be a whole day?
Nope! If you like, you can choose a half day instead. If you live outside the GMT timezone and a 7am to 9pm day just doesn’t make sense for you, a half day might work better. Chat to me and we can work out the best timings.
Who is a WhatsApp VIP Day for?
This service is for you if:
- you write (or are thinking of writing) middle grade or YA. So if your book is for readers under 8 or over 18, I won’t have the expertise to help you
- you’re looking for general story help rather than grammar or language support. I’m a developmental editor which means I’m all about the story – character, plot, pacing, structure, etc. If you need feedback or advice on things like grammar, syntax, word choice, etc., a copyeditor or line editor would be able to help.
How it works
- You’ll pick a day and we’ll swap numbers
- I’ll send you an author questionnaire to fill in so I can understand what you’re working on
- On your chosen day, you’ll be able to send me messages on WhatsApp via text or voice notes. We won’t do live calls or video chats – this is all about firing off ideas and replies in the moment, ad-hoc
- Our Whatsapp VIP Day will last from 9am (UK time) until 7pm (UK time).
- I’ll make myself as available as I can for you all day. I might not always reply to your messages immediately but I’ll be as quick as I can. And sometimes I’ll need thinking time! If a response is going to take a little longer while I research or mull over your question, I’ll let you know
- My replies will be a mix of text and voice notes
- Although I spend most of my day in my office, when I send you a message I might be picking my son up from school, walking to the shops, making lunch or feeding the cat so please excuse any weird background noises!
- You do not have to block out an entire day for our chat! You can carry on with your life and just fire me messages as and when you want. It’s not a full-day phonecall.
Ask me anything – without the stress of a phone call!
- No being put on the spot
- No video
- No pressure
- No rush to respond



