Here are some lovely things my gorgeous clients have said about me. When I’m having a bad day, I like to read these and eat Cadbury’s Creme Eggs.
‘It’s already helping massively’
I want to say a MASSIVE THANK YOU for all that you’ve done for me and my book baby. It’s already helping massively. I already love all the three big suggestions you made and I’m really happy you thought it’s a book worth working on as that’s exactly what I’m planning to do 🙂
Martina O’Brien | YA
‘I’ve learnt so much from the process’
Once again the insights are amazing. I’ve learnt so much from the process and I think and hope my MS is all the better for your advice and recommendations. It is so beneficial to have an expert opinion on my query package.
Honestly, I’ve stared at it for so long that I had run out of ideas but now I have superb guidance to hopefully take the MS and the query package up yet another level. Not a chance I could have done that without your input.
Valerie Troy | Middle grade
‘I don’t want our editing relationship to end yet’
I have just skimmed through your brilliant editorial critique and will follow your suggestions and recommended reading lists. I think you have been very good at steering me the right way. I don’t want our editing relationship to end yet. I still need you!
Akin Jabar | MG
‘I will seek a developmental edit much earlier next time’
Well I have read the report and documents and ARRGHH!! But in a good way. I have to say that your comments, suggestions and advice are excellent and I don’t disagree with much if anything that you suggest. They are really helpful and will truly make this book better.
Also the pointers will definitely improve my subsequent stories. I will seek a developmental edit much earlier next time as I think this would have made the whole process a quicker and much more streamlined editing process.
Jonathan Evans | The Revisionist
“Her guidance was invaluable”
Siobhán helped me through every step of the novel writing process-—coaching me through the first rough draft and then reading and giving insight on later drafts. Through each step her guidance was invaluable, giving fresh perspective and focus in a kind but thoughtful way.
Her advice shaped my manuscript and query into a project that got a full manuscript request from an agent in the first week of querying so far.
Joelle Wisler | YA
‘I’m really impressed with your critical eye’
‘I’m so glad I landed on your name in a sea of editors’
I’m seriously so glad I landed on your name in a sea of editors. Thank you for the advice, recommendations, coaching and teaching. It’s all brilliant! I was so clueless and am very grateful to now have this information to guide my thinking. There is a lot of info about writing out there but it’s infinitely better to have someone who can help me focus on the important stuff (with great links) in a contemporary context.
I’m very excited about the next draft and think the direction you have proposed in most instances feel right to me. Importantly, I feel empowered by your critique and that makes me more confident that I can produce better work.
Anoshi Mocktar | YA
‘I have never felt so quickly understood and supported by an editor.’
Siobhan is absolutely brilliant! I’m trying not to sound too gushy but her work truly is astonishing — the best editing I have ever received.
Siobhan is a master editor at every level, from word to idea. She is a consummate craftsperson and expert researcher. She is also immensely creative, able to help solve a manuscript’s problems and repair its shortcomings.
She is efficient and generous, bright and fun — an absolute joy to work with. I have never felt so quickly understood and supported by an editor.
‘I can’t wait to dive back into my story with greater clarity’
I can’t wait to dive back into my story with greater clarity about the pacing. I also truly appreciate the comps and MG insight! Thank you, thank you!
Jennifer Grolemund | Middle grade
‘The best editing I’ve ever received’
Siobhan is absolutely brilliant! I’m trying not to sound too gushy but her work truly is astonishing — the best editing I have ever received. Siobhan is a master editor at every level, from word to idea. She is a consummate craftsperson and expert researcher.
She is efficient and generous, bright and fun — an absolute joy to work with. I have never felt so quickly understood and supported by an editor.
Sara Cassidy | Children’s author
‘My eyes hungrily soaked up every paragraph’
Thank you so much for the report – I’m going to devour it. My eyes hungrily soaked up every paragraph and I love that you ‘get’ the type of story I’m trying to tell. I will do my absolute best to reinforce your recommendations in the MS. I could rattle on all day but I’m bursting to get back into it.
Valerie Troy | Middle grade
‘The story has been truly seen for the first time’
I just wanted to say thank you so much for all the hard work you have done on my edit. I am absolutely thrilled with it; the attention to detail and depth with which you went into the manuscript left me speechless. The hashtag system is so handy and the book map made so many things clear for me.
I feel like the story has been truly seen for the first time. I will recommend your work without hesitation.
Aisling White | YA
‘Several pennies have actually dropped’
I’ve had a look through everything and wanted to thank you so much for the forensic view of my novel. It’s the first time I’ve had a developmental edit like this completed and it has been, in turn, horrifying, enlightening, surprising and confidence boosting! But I guess you’ve probably seen that before.
In many respects, several pennies have actually dropped and I have a firmer idea of what I need to do and will work on more research and reading.
Maria White | Middle grade
‘A breath of fresh air’
Siobhan has not only been a breath of fresh air, breathing new life into my first ever draft manuscript, but she’s also provided me with the impetus to get it finished. Her comments and feedback led me to make some hard decisions but these have resulted in a much better book. Here’s to the future!
David Rogers | CHOMP! Charlie Carter and the Monster Pike
‘I can confidently edit my manuscript with clear eyes, a clear goal and a clear path forward’
I think the coolest thing about this process is that it “cleared the waters” for me. Before your feedback, my book felt murky. I knew it needed strengthening, but the path forward felt obscure and overwhelming. I’d muddle around, revising here and there, but never really getting to the heart of what needed to be done.
Now I can confidently edit my manuscript with clear eyes, a clear goal, and a clear path forward. It has been fun, even. And I’m definitely going to be more satisfied with the result when it’s all said and done.
Logan Karlie | Dream by the Shadows
‘I am completely blown away!’
‘One of the best things I’ve ever done for my writing’
Getting The Monster manuscript critique was one of the best things I’ve ever done for my writing. I’ve been writing for years, but this manuscript critique has developed and delved into a much stronger, deeper and focused version of my novel.
Plus, the book map has offered me a solid, dependable way to create my plots and stories in the future (even if it took me 45 minutes to do one row – eek!). The book map feels unnatural and weird, but I know it’s pushing me to question what I think about every single scene so that I can justify it all.
I feel like a much stronger writer and can’t imagine ever working another way – especially now I know my work is always going to benefit from it.
Hazel Compton | YA
‘This is exactly what I needed’
What a treat! This is exactly what I needed. Your critique seems so thorough and rich with insight. I will be sure to send you questions if I’m unsure about anything you meant but I think you’re so thorough that I will be able to digest almost everything on my own just fine. It was an absolute pleasure to work with you as well!
Chanya Sainvilus | YA sci-fi critique
‘So thorough and rich with insight’
‘One of the best editors working with emerging voices’
Like the best of editors, Siobhan will respect your own individual writing style – and work within those parameters to coax you towards ever greater clarity and impact. She has an instinctive grasp of story, and some of the best craft knowledge I’ve ever come across.
As a writer herself, she understands the highs and lows of the journey and always has a listening ear. She is never one to rush, and when a script inevitably throws up a knotty issue, will ponder deeply before putting forward possible solutions. Her openness, kind heart and gentleness make her one of the best editors working with emerging voices.
Chrissy Sturt | Middle grade
‘Your generous effort has already made the book better’
Thank you SO much for all your notes and for the honesty. I read them all and they’re extremely helpful. I’m very grateful for you taking the time. Your generous effort has already made the book better.
Chad Lutzke | Bloodletter: The Hemato Pages
‘I feel empowered by your critique’
I’m seriously so glad I landed on your name in a sea of editors. Thank you for the advice, recommendations, coaching and teaching as far as the writing techniques are concerned. It’s all brilliant! I was so clueless and am very grateful to now have this information to guide my thinking.
I’m very excited about the next draft and think the direction you have proposed in most instances feel right to me. Importantly, I feel empowered by your critique and that makes me more confident that I can produce better work.
Anoshi Saretzki | YA
‘Tending loving care’
Thank you for your tender loving care with my manuscript and all your kind words, and for providing such detailed, useful feedback.
Lori Kohler | Middle grade
‘I can’t believe how lucky I was to encounter you!’
‘Absolutely delightful!’
Thank you so much! Working with you has been absolutely delightful! I truly appreciate your thoughtfulness.
Jena Ataras | MG
“I couldn’t have asked for a better editor”
You’ve nailed everything and picked up on the things only an editorial expert can spot!You really have been amazing. I couldn’t have asked for a better editor to help with this!
All of your comments have made me realise exactly what needs working on. They are super informative, and will really lead me in the right direction. It feels so much stronger, and I’m now super excited to see it in print.
Angela Kecojevic | Train
“A breath of fresh air”
Siobhan has not only been a breath of fresh air, breathing new life into my first ever draft manuscript, but she’s also provided me with the impetus to get it finished. Her comments and feedback led me to make some hard decisions but these have resulted in a much better book. Here’s to the future!